You're real handy with that piano, this was a good listen.
Could use a little more flavor in some areas, I'm extremely happy that the second part was different from the first, the transitions were pretty good not too jarring.
An idea, at the kick stutter at about :57 cutoff the attack on each piano note slightly, make it feel like it's got a gate on it, and throw in more little changes like that to break up the repetitiveness.
Not sure what the samples are from, but sounds cool.
Oh mate I wish I could play the piano. I found a midi score and used the notes, I am not a musician at any rate (as much as I do attempt to write melodies from time to time).
I made this one like a fun thing back in 2003 or so, so there is no work files to tamper with no more. The talk I nicked from the movie "Everything is Illuminated", one of my absolute all time favs. It had some background music on why I trashed it up to the whispering thing that is going on as to erase the original score.
It was a fun plaything to make and intended as such, lighstepping fun with an idea. Obvi the second part has some extra flare than the first, whoever does a verbatim repeat at the end? ;)
Thanks for your considered input, much appreciated!