Hey...
the beginning was good, started off with a bang! i liked the arp a lot at 1:15. I think the synth you used at 4:07 was a little too high pitched. Everything else was put together very well. Alot of diversity which was good. But some things seemed a bit forced. Like you had no more ideas so you put some random things in. haha only your second song but VERY VERY good, you got lots of potential man, i really look foward to your new songs.
8/10 4/5
Dj-Unknown (check out my new song Shock the system)