You captured the futuristic city vibes very well! It feels like you even captured the absence of charm and individuality one often finds in older cities. In your interpretation of the art, I'm wondering if the character has lived there for a long time or if she's visiting and perhaps the song embodies her first impressions.
I like the eargasmic expression of the leads. The sound design is excellent.
There are some awesome countermelodies, and I like the way the main lead is highlighted with panning effects.
The bass that comes in around 0:36 doesn't seem to fit comfortably in the mix. I wish I could comment more on the mix but I'm not remotely familiar enough with this genre.
Congrats on a great entry!