Reviews for A Father's Tears

[Suspended-3rd-Chord]

;_;

Dark fading keys...they progress perfectly...my favorite part of the melody is around 1:00...floating, slow echo effects as the father's tears roll down his cheeks..the string snippets on top add lotsa flavor, and excellent job combining all three voices to make some striking chords. Excellent clarity once again.

The lowest bass string frequency helps retain a sad feel...to make a change in emotions, you could switch the note every 4-6 bars or so...not so sure if you want a dynamic type of feel in this track tho. The piano progression is just fine as it is, tho some thicker chords would sound nice and produce some interesting harmony (like if you put a thicker chord at 1:12 that would have made for a more powerful sound

no percussion in here = great. Creates extra "room" for feelings and reflections. Percussion would have definetly been a distraction,

thanks again for another splendid ambient piece TwistedTechnology!

Twistedtechnology responds:

hmmmm i definately see the need for some thicker chords here. You make a good point there. And also you were right, i didnt wanta dynamic bass line for this song for two reasons 1. i wasnt using the bass for any reason other than giving a saddening depth and 2. I really suck at making dynamic basslines cuz im lazy and was never too fond of making basslines lol.

I really thought hard about the percussion issue. I wanted to throw some in when i started making the piece, but then i realized i could move the song along just fine without them, so i left it as it was (much to my liking)

Thanks for the kind words and awesome score!

[ID-N]

...............

......sometimes i cry
......a little heart wants to fly away from me...........
.....the sun ask me that i try to explain this........

wooow man, what a AMAZIN track
you have a really talent!!! use this
keep it up man

I give you TEN x TEN x TEN POINTS

Twistedtechnology responds:

YAY 1000 POINTS!!!!!!!!!!!11 Thanks alot for the review and awesome score XDXDXD

[jimmy-mac63]

I went to Cuba

In 1994 Twisted....You were 6 at the time :-)

Twistedtechnology responds:

lol i actually remember that. And once i got this piece started i fed off of that as a matter of fact XD

Love ya tons man!

[DanRaniera]

Voted 5

Wow, this song makes me feel like, when i was a kid, my dad gones for 1 year, it made me cry.

thanks for this, it made me remind!

=D ='{

Twistedtechnology responds:

Ah, i know that feeling, reminds me of when my dad left for cuba way back in like...'93 Glad i could remind you of that, and that you liekd the song!

thanks for the review!!

~Twistedtechnology

[Red-Slash]

simple, and subtle = beautiful

this song oozes beauty on a spiritual level i lose myself in it and invision myself flying across snow covered landscapes. My fantasy is realised and i have lost myself in a dnd world where i am the hero and the peoples legend.

bravo

keep writing this music my friend I cant get enough of it

Twistedtechnology responds:

It's not very often i can make pieces like this anymore..... But, you can bet im gonna keep trying XD Glad you liked it!

thanks forthe review!!!

~Twistedtechnology