Poetic
That was your first movie? Well it's a hell of a lot better then mine. This was a well done piece of flash. Maybe a little soft background music would put across the idea of depression. Heh, i guess we can all be depressed together - woohoo \O/
Wow
I checked this out after watching "Love Kills"... I was a bit rough on the drawing skills in that one, but I was just trying to be honest :)
The animation in this one is much much better, it's a veritable plethora of flash text effects set against simple, clean, stylish graphics.
Like everyone has said, it just needs some background music to solidify the mood... I can't think of anything suitably choatic and depressing, but if I do I'll let you know :) Nine Inch Nails seems like a good place to start... trent's dark emotional intensity is on par with your own.
adio
First of all, I appreciate your honesty, rough comments are what pushes me to never make the same mistakes again. I would've put music into this, but I didn't know how to when I made this. NOW I DO! So, next time, I'll put together the smooth animations of "I'm Falling" and the sound skills I learned while making "Love Kills"... and KABOOM, Who knows what will appear...
6
This is interesting, this, your first submission, had better graphics than one of you last submissions, "Welcome to New York." Had there been music, this would of been a lot better. Nice backgrounds, just lacks music.
Ryan
um???????
Im falling into confusion!!! This animation was boring! made no sence!! SO GAY!!! I hopo you didnt spend more then 5 minits on this thing!! Dude you have good style! Just putt it to good use not to gay use!!!
VERY GOOD!
For a first flash video.