Hehe...
Well I thought the missy elliot thing was the only submission you had.
But I was wrong.
This was hilarious... If I were you I wouldn't even bother working on drawing, because I think it's awesome that your quality is poor.
Only thing I have to say is, come on... if your an older, mature person... the last thing you should do is make a movie showing you being immature.
(Oh yeah... I know this review is about 2-4 years too late... Hehehe)