Eh.
A mediocre effort at best. First of all, you're using sprites, which unless you have strong plot, humour or special effects to back it up, it will blow hard. Sadly, this had choppy animation, a pathetic plotline, little humour, and no ingenuity. And for fuck sake's, please spell check your animation. There's no better way to tell the world you just pulled this animation from the depths of your ass by not glossing over your finished project.
Don't let me discourage you though. It's a lot better than what I've seen out there. Stick with it. Think of a better plot, fill it with plenty of jokes, practice your animating skills, and you'll hit the front page in no time.