That was very good for a first one!
I really see talent. It was cool with that slomo thing. Needed some music or something though. Make more!
Reviews for "The Target"
Meh. You can do better.
If I didn't personally know you I'd say "screw this", but since I know that you have the capability of doing better things.... FIVEN!
Not bad for a first go at Flash
As subject, but it could REALLY do with some recorded voices.