Um...
No offense, man, but this looks like something out of Mario Paint. Everybody's gotta start somewhere, but Newgrounds is better than... well, this. Take the Blam now, and try to do something a little more creative for next time.
You get a 2 for at least trying, though.
Spare us these cartoons
Im not sure why someone would embarrass themselves with this crap. however the music was good. Youll spen dmost of the time waiting for the author to spell SOUTH PARK. Good grief charlie brown...
um....
Hey bud. I'm sorry, but you really need some animation skills before you can expect to post something here. People here who don't submit their own shit will blam anything that doesn't meet their standards. You ever notice how people who make their own movies always write encouraging reviews? So yeah anyway my first suggestion is GET A PRELOADER. i really had trouble watching it all choppy and shit. and if at all possible try to minimize the amount of freehand drawing just because that seriously fucks up the animation. I don't know what else to say, but sorry, dude.
needs better animation
Just tweak it a little, make it more smoother. The sound is great, but when its about to cross over, make it loop instead of overlapping itself.
Poor.
For a turd of the week, I commend its basic animation, but it's still poor work at any rate.