Hrmm.
The intro was scratchy. And stayed that way for thirty seconds. I think it would have been okay if the intro was maybe thirteen seconds, but a whole thirty is just dragging it on.
Then the rock portion started, which would have been wicked awesome except for it being so darn scratchy. I also felt that sometimes the song didn't have enough "boom" to it.
Still liked it, however.
Hmmmm.
I've listened to this so many times, but I may rework it sometime.
Who knows. =)
It felt a bit empty.
I like the guitar, but you build up the anticipation too much, and delay too much on certain parts. Between 0:46 and 1:16 I thought, 'where are the chords?' In 1:17 they finally kicked in, but something was still missing. In 1:48 the song finally got going.
But just try to do that sooner next time, otherwise the song becomes boring quickly.
I guess I would be a phenomenal suspense film director no?
Stuff needs to be redone and what not, and thanks to bad-man's generosity, i should be ready to go hardcore on some ass kicking drums.
alright...
This song was missing something. I think bass. keep up the good work.
Yeah, there's no bass on there. lol.
I wish I had a bass guitar. It sucks having to do it all on computer. =\
Up to Par
Drums were pretty boring until the guitar riff came in. Even though it's meant to be a marching-type song, I didn't really get that feeling from the sound of the drum.
Sorry, I'll get them to do a stand up comedy routine next time. =].
GRAH!
YOUR OFFTUNE NOTES, THEY BURN!
*Is burning*
*Is dead from bad key's*