Nice
The piano makes the song sound very nice, so good job with that. Oh, and thanks for reviewing my song, too.
Reviews for "[Kriz] - Revolution of dreams"
Kr1z responds:
woot thx! i also think the classic piano in this dancesong makes it really better :D
cya around here;
more songs are to come!
Not bad for ur second submission =D
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ooooo...i like the piano...im listening to it atm.....i like i like...but i have to say the ticking sound in the opening is kinda off....its not on beat with the song....sounds like a close hi-hat or something...im not sure which instrument it is...but its off beat...this is a good song... 8/10 4/5
Kr1z responds:
i dont hear any opening ticking offbeat sound ..
and yea, the piano makes this song rock :D
Woah, good.
I liked the subtle crowd noise in the beginning. It made the track stand out instantly, whereas without it, the very basic bass line would have left a poor first impression.
The piano, in particular, is very good. It was a very wise decision to only have the piano going at parts-because if it had played that melody over and over the entire song through it would have gotten pretty tired. The string sounds are good, the synths are good, the percussion and bass are good, if a bit pedestrian in composition. Most importantly, all the parts in this song play very well together, and they form a really energetic, danceable song with a nice melody. Top notch stuff, much better than most of the stuff on here by far, and its only your second submission!
All that said, I do have a problem with how unoriginal this track is. You do the whole dance-y techno energetic track extremely well, but there isn't much more to it than that. There isn't really anything in here that I haven't heard before, or that made me sit up and go "!, that's an amazing idea", you know? Still, this is only your second submission, so it could very well be that you are getting the fundamentals down (and they're here, leaps and bounds over lots of other stuff) but I hope in future tracks that you really try to think out of the box and make something that is completely your own.
Anyways, a very nice, energetic track, keep it up.
Kr1z responds:
wow excellent review, thx for ur time :) !!
ur right, right and right, its dancey, but not very much more then standard dancestuff
as my experience will raise, originality will raise too i hope :D
great stuff
just add some mastering to it to lessen the high pass. good percussion too.