Hmmm...
Well, it's not as bad as most of the crap in the portal. Kinda cool drawing style. But it needs a lot of work. Mainly:
1. Pay more attention to actual animation, if these characters moved a little more realistic instead of just floating around all stiff it would be cooler.
2. Dialogue. I wasn't the least bit interested in what the characters were saying because they didn't seem to say anything interesting.
3. Story! Give us a reason to watch! There is not even a semblance of a character arch or plotline! Give us a reason to not turn off the cartoon before its over.
Hey man, I am not trying to bash you. I am just trying to tell you what I think this needs to be a great animation instead of just a "pretty okay" one. You don't have to take my advice. But like I said I did like the style and I can tell you actually spent some time on it. If I didn't think you have potential I wouldn't have commented.