This was beautifully done. I didn't think it was great, just good. It reminded me of "Ratatouille". Well, that movie's so popular, it's probably just that I compare any story about mice and food to that film. I really like that image of him touching the cheese. What a holy image.
He looks so funny with his big eyes. Wait, this says Weekly 3rd Place. According to the e-mail I got, this is the Weekly User's Choice! Tell someone about this! Even if I personally don't love it, other people do!