You got somethin goin there, jus need improvements
First, clear up the sound or re record the stuff cuz it was kind of fuzzy... it gave us the army feel of it but hard to hear... second... if u want a real good score make it a movie/the sound thing... like while hes talking... make things happen that go along with what hes saying...if u dont want to do it just get a good artist to help u out and u could have a real good vid...