I can't express enough how much i love this short. The characters, the backgrounds, the humor, the art style... everything looks and sounds great! Btw, Jessie is cute AF, love her.
I can't express enough how much i love this short. The characters, the backgrounds, the humor, the art style... everything looks and sounds great! Btw, Jessie is cute AF, love her.
This has a LOT of potential. Heroes who are middling at their jobs are always a fun thing to explore. A lot of the gags work here. I'm hoping to get more of a feel for Loriner and Jessie's dynamic a bit more in the next episode. I get that Lornier is kind of the wacky one, while Jessie is grounded, but I feel like they switched on and off depending on the gags. Not that you CAN'T do that, but in a five minute short, it kind of distracts from what archetypes you're trying to establish. Other than that, not a whole lot to complain about honestly. Great work!
great pilot
This is soo good
Hilarious! I can't describe it but it has that newground-y feeling to it. I hope this gets the recognition it deserves.