Nice work....
While I am much more into Classical stuff on the audio portal, I think this song may have convinced me that Techno and Trance music isn't all tht bad.
The counter melody that starts up at around 00:50 is a great addition. The differences in tempo and texture make this a very effective song and additional percussive noises that enter and recede at various points in the song allow for great transitions. My one complaint is that I found that there was never a place where you had a "stop time" motion in which everything slowed down or the instrumentation fell out completely for a few seconds, while you perhaps had synth runs imitating something like a harp. I think that if you added something like that, it would make for a cool effect.