Nice stuff, and the writing is pretty good. There are some things that stand out to me. The voice acting is a little quiet, and with some sound effects (like the cheering) being way too loud I think it needs to be adjusted a bit. The quality also needs some improvements, I'm sure each va has a different setup. The sound effects were cartoony and fit the art style, and the animation was appealing. The end was crazy fast, I hope to see some more polished stuff in the future.