((( HMMMMMM OK )))
Well notbad, i like the whole alien theme, they could use more detail in the head and body, and speed up the talking just abit, looks good though, story is ok...
MOVIE COMMENTARY: Aliens invade...
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((( HMMMMMM OK )))
Well notbad, i like the whole alien theme, they could use more detail in the head and body, and speed up the talking just abit, looks good though, story is ok...
MOVIE COMMENTARY: Aliens invade...
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OK I guess
This was ok for an opening part - nothing wondeful, nothing mediocre
Just one question:
Why do the blue people sound like they are on dope?
No wait, I have more questions. Why do the blue people want sauce? and what kind of a threat is "give them to us or we will come and take them" anyway?
sauce? It's resources dumbass. And what was I supposed to say: "Give them to us or we will blow up your planet!.....er after we take the resources...yeah." Just simplifies things. And dope? Their aliens... they sound wierd ok?(really it's my stupid mike. But I bought a better one...)
Pretty good first submission
As a sound engineer, I'd just like to give you a couple of hints for your next installments:
1) Back of the mic, it'll get less of the clicks of your tongue as you talk, & it sounds better when you slow it down.
2) Try to use your mic as far away from your comp as you can, it'll cut down on the humm.
But other than that, good work.
Well thanks for that constructive critisism I guess. And I did slow it down. I tried talking really far away from it but then it sounded like he was yelling, or it was too quiet. I guess I just need a better mike.
Not bad.
Not bad. I'm trying to learn flash, I could'nt do what you did. Keep it up.
Well thanks, but I think I at least deserved a 5. But I guess that's just me.
too short...yatta yatta
too short, crappy animation, plot isnt anything new or something old with no new interesting twist...ill watch part 2 and then make my votes