That wasn't so great
it had no point to it... the only good drawings was his head and the dogs head. it made no sence at all and was overly boring.. dunno how it passed review.
Reviews for "Crimelord Odyssey"
Comatose responds:
sorry to displease you. the one im working on now has a story and purpose, and i will try to maintain the same art quality through out the flash. And like i said, this warped system of humor isn't for everybody, and im sorry to have wasted your time.
That's one evil dude
I'd say this was a pretty good entry as a first. The guy's head was well drawn, and all the animations were pretty smooth. Kinda boring however to see him jump around, but the end was pretty good. good work
Comatose responds:
yeah, again sorry for the no-plot or point business. I was just sort of fooling around and testing out the program, and i did it in three hours. Im not making excuses, so point taken.
o-kay......
well that was odd. Hmm... the biggest problem was the music, change it..... looks pretty nice.... Well enjoy the 8
Comatose responds:
thanks for the 8, i will do my best not to be so musically challenged in the future.
Good First Effort
This was solid for your first flash work. The animation wasn't choppy or anything; it was very smooth. There wasn't much of a plot, but that's cool. You didn't tell us there was going to be one. I would make one suggestion: try compressing the audio more because this piece actually had a pretty large file size for how short it was. I know compressed audio doesn't sound as good, but see if you can tweak it so load times are shorter, esp. during peak hours. I see definite potential. Keep it up!
Comatose responds:
hey thanks, i'll try to figure out how to compress the tunes and pick better ones. Yeah, i was just mucking around, so sorry for the pointlessness