Way to go...
Always wanted someone to make a killtoons about Pikachu, stupid little yellow thing. I think basically your gonna get a high rating on this move, simply because there so many people with pent-up contempt for Pokemon.
(P.S. This would kick so much more ass if there were more then one death scene for pikachu, not just him freaking out and giving off the Japanese tear like thing when you scare him. You might make it to where you can shoot him in the tail and the foot and things like that. Spice up the Jazz. Keep up the good work)