Woah, your trying the wrong thing.
Oh man, you tried to do a spinoff of NG survivor? Oh man, oh man. Of all flashes, you tried to make your own version of one of the most renowned flashes in the portal, that was a bad mistake. People are going to compare this to the original NG survivor and snap at this. The fact that you did, essentialy, take Eric's idea and expand on it was pretty bad. Onto the flash itself, the visuals were very slapped together, and the plot was very very slow. There was very little humor in this as well, the only thing you have in here that attempts humor is the masacar, that's it. And how can you ask to vote someone off already? There was no immunity challange and there was absolutely no character development. Try to work much harder to avoid comparrison of the original, or try something else.