im glad you fixed some things up. The voice actors did great, its not perfect but this is a solid pilot.
Reviews for "KEY-MAN!"
Little nitpick here but the notches on keys face up not down
BoyPorcelain responds:
They do in the UK, so let's just say in that one random case it was a UK-based lock? error solved, boom.
The production quality of the assets is pretty good and some of the jokes work for me, but it drags on: the pacing is horribly slow, like an improv bit that got slowed down to 50% speed to try and add more jokes inbetween the original jokes that were there. Half the time I forgot there was even a fire, something sound design could amend, but overall this could be a tight 6 minutes if you cut the fluff
pretty nice visually. humor is mildy dark. but i wasn't sure what to make of key man himself as a character.
yeah, it's pretty good