Man, that sure was funny
Maybe you could have added a fight scene or two. Like when he is first reunited with his wife, it'll be better if you can add in scenes where the warrior has some kind of flashback, and show us how he got the wound, maybe from a powerful foe or something or maybe he got that wound trying to save his buddy.....you know...the usual heroics and stuff.
Now comes the funny part.......... OH MY GOODNESS. If YOU had a critical wound like that, I'll bet that's the LAST THING on your mind, you'll probably fight to stay Conscious!!! I can stop laughing when I think about it, ENCORE ENCORE wahaha