I have some suggestions to make
Its good and your brother made that 3d scenery out of Swish(which is good for a game...creds to your brother for that)But I say take out the stickmen(like the last 23 people said before me and I think you should take the hand off and just leave a cursor(well that target thing...)Yea and add a part where you get in a police car or something!!!And a helicopter!!!Now THATS front page stuff right there!!!