Ok I honestly haven't felt this good since before quarantine started. Thanks, man. This was awesome.
Reviews for "T-Logic - Kid on the Bike"
TaintedLogic responds:
Thanks so much, man! This made my day. ^^
I didn't know what to expect and had fun listening to it. I can't really say anything bad because I'm not sure I've heard many like it. So, good job, thanks for the entertainment!
TaintedLogic responds:
Thanks for the review, MistaRogerz! I don’t usually make a lot of pop songs, so I think the influence of other genres tends to seep in when I make one. :)
This is so lovely and very unique, I love it!
TaintedLogic responds:
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :)
Awesome work!
Very original song! Love how the song constantly changes and evolves going into different places and genres everytime, those vocal fx you added at 1:02 are excellent, they definitely open up the song and from then on its a absolute joyride into uncharted territory B]
Are you the one singing? In some parts your voice reminds me a bit Damon Albarn from Blur and Gorillaz !! :D
Definitely a very creative song overall, looking forward to hearing more of your music :)
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TaintedLogic responds:
Thanks so much for the review, Time0ff! I am the one singing, and as much as I think I still have a lot of work to do on my vocals, I'm really glad you liked them so much. The vocal fx at 1:02 are actually because I used a different mic to record that part. XD It recorded louder, but also with slightly less clarity than the chorus, I think. Eventually, after it became clear I wouldn't have access again to the better mic, I decided to delete parts of other recordings so that the mic usage lined up with the structure of the verses. Thanks again for stopping by! ^_^
I think it's OK.
The composition wasnt the most original. The voice isn't that bad - I like it. Some parts in the chorus went off beat. Unless you stretch it to perfect rhythm you'll find it is hard to sing everything on time. Lol
The mistake I think done with singing is that you chose to sing low. Most professional male singers are baritones/tenors because the higher notes make it seem more exciting. You may not always be able to sing what you compose but keep a chorus mostly above c4-F4 (fl c5-f5 since it's not octavely correct) to keep it exciting. It was also a mistake myself included made when I started singing.
Compose what Your voice can handle definitely. Remember you have falsetto and mix voice options.
For the mixing, it sounded good. I can't really make much comments on a mix. The value however, not much was going on. But honestly not much always have to be in a song to make it good. I hope ppl realize this.
Oh but the low notes were not good. You changed the tone but you should always use the same tone becuase itll sound like a different person. Also it went flat when you ddi that. So I recommend to keep same tone
TaintedLogic responds:
Thanks for all the reviews, man! I definitely should've thought more about the range of my voice before composing this, haha. I agree that the composition isn't very original - it's a pop song, after all. :) I agree that the low notes don't sound all that clean. I think you're right that part of it is my lack of vocal skills and part of it is a questionable compositional choice. Thanks again for all the tips with the vocals! God knows I need them. ^^