Youre siluethes are cool
kinda mix of frank miller and GotCheeks really cool
but man its a bit difficult to understand that the right silhouette its the same guy.
It can bring confusion to think that he actually killed 2 diff guys. Maybe placing him in more obvious trajectories from the left silhouette could help.
But i really like this style twist from u, its really cool to see diferent styles in an artist, coz every style got's its apropiate place/format