Still crap
That audio file need some serious trimming. I'm not watching this to get a music download. I'm watching this to try and get some entertainment, which this doesn't have either. What are the green triangles? Why is a cutout rhino shooting at them?
And boredom set in...
Man... at least learn to use Symbols instead of tweening everything... go check out some books on Flash from the library, then come back when you've:
Learned to properly end a movie (not just going back to the reload screen)
Learned to trim the download size
Learned flash
I'm sorry, but this was pointless and mundane. And the song selection was poor.
I'm lost.. and bored.
That really made no sense to me what so ever. A rhino was sneezing at green triangles? The last shot looked like a DBZ rip off of a power up blast or something... well, it would have it was more than an expanding circle.
I don't mean to be rude, but I'm trying to be totally honest. I'm not into that style of music, but the song wasn't bad. Though I don't see how the song related to the flash in any way, and for as wild as the music was the animation was a bit bland.
It was very short, and it didn't have much of an ending. I'd go for making a basic plot next time, and perhaps some dialogue (in the way of subtitles at least) to help make sense of it.
Good Luck with your future submissions.
What?
Sorry, didn't understand.
Crap
this was just plain bad, i hope for your sake that it was your first ever submission, i cant see how this didnt get blammed the blam outta the sky