Good Try
Nice try for your first one. Make it longer though.
Reviews for "adopted by joe"
crypt-keeper responds:
thanks, maybe ill make the other episodes a bit longer.
shitty animation
work a little harder on the fucking animation, dude. you can do better than that!
crypt-keeper responds:
yeah i know i could have probably done a bit better the truth is this is jsut a simple series im putting together while i work on a better one this is jsut supose to be simple and funny.
This series has potentinal
This is better than most stick animations as it features an actual story and actual animation.
This series can become quite interesting, with increasingly absurd indignities for the kid (he needs a name) to endure before a twist in the last episode where Joe dies or wins the lottery and dumps him in a ditch or something. (Just don't end it with the kid going pyscho and killing Joe. That's dull. You could start to do that as a decoy, but don't follow through.)
Wow, I'm giving too detailed adivce. Sorry.
Keep at it!
crypt-keeper responds:
thanks for the advice i will certainly take it into consideration. It shouldent be long before there are more episodes i already have 3 more that I have drawn up on comics
NO PITY
Don't ask for pity. It Doesn't look good and nobody is goin to give it to you. Just do good work and you will get a good score and review.