interesting. but needs work
it was an interesting story. story wise you have a good thing going. and even in some parts of the style, it was very interesting. but...this is not Noir. Noir is more then just black and white and creepy. its about character traits, setting, lighting, and so much more. you have a good start here. but as all persons studying visual arts is told "you have to know the rules...before you can efficiently break them."
ive made better shit
i've made better shit.. like trick daddy gettin hit with a dildo..fuck. I like the way you scramble the camera and shit though..
Why dont you submit some of them, mailbox head. Oh wait...i bet you did but they sucked.
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why?
you must be a messed up person
how could you even get over a 3? thats what i dont understand. Over all it just plain sucked. The animation and graphics were so bad that it was funny.
That sucked....?
ya i agree with the last guy, ur messed up, if you want to see a good example of a noir black and white film, watch my movie ; "mental nightmare".
thx.