Ok, BIG review time =)
Ok, so the the beat was good all the way, through, although it coulda been a little hard on the kick, to go with the snare. The starting melody sounded good, but the echo was wrong, i think it shoulda been goin with the beat instead. The bass was a bit light as well, that woulda sounded better much thicker and deeper. And when the starting melody got to the climax of the song, it sounded a bit empty, especially after the reverse beat brought up the two tunes together. It also woulda sounded much better if you put a second synth in unison with it.
This is a very good tune, i think it could be presented better though.