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Reviews for "McGraven"
Not bad
pretty good, the emotion was there, but I'll have to agree with everyone else about the drawings, another thing, some of your story's history was a little off, so it kinda added to the unrealisticness of it all. But all-in-all I say good job.
It's really cool......
But the graphics are rather bad and make me feel sick~! I mean not the animations but the drawings......the face of the man and the woman is quite terrible, and the hands and bodies of the soiders are quite strange...the story is terrific, but there's room for improvement for the art work. I'm not critizing your work but I think you got the potential to make your works perfect.
Full marks for the idea
It's just that I couldt get past the... animation. when the guy was running and jumping it looked so unrealistic that it really detracted from what he was doing.
work on the animation
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Bravo!
Nicely done...keep up the good work