cool
I like the aftermath!Sound is an improvment.
Reviews for "Stickafigure Air Show"
dr00pa responds:
Thank you Jiroy, but what else can I do to improve my animations?
funny
funny and pretty original
God Job
This is basically a quality movie. There are some small faults, such as the wings on the jets on the wrong way, but it was entertaining.
dr00pa responds:
Thanks, i will strive to improve.
Hmm.. your getting better.
This is better than your last submission "Thank Mr Smiley" in almost all areas, but there are a few areas that need attention.
Graphics: One of the worst things about this is the time spent on the graphics, and it is one of the reasons that your submissions never really become "L33T". First up, you should add some textures to 'solid' objects, like the planes that come flying by in the beginning, cuz right now they look like polygons with colours flying out the back. And maybe try using more 'perspectives' in each of the various scenes. 4/10
Sound: That last guy was an asshole, just because your 12, it don't mean you shouldn't use voice in your submissions. Most commercial sound packages allow you to deepen the sounds played. Maybe you could try that, so as to make it sound more 'professional' and to make it just a bit more realistic. But it wasn't so bad, and having voice is preferable to using text anywayz. 4/10
Interactivity: It had a preloader and start button. Woopie. 1/10
Style: None. 0/10
Violence: Again, you have overdone your ratings, this is still 'Mild Violence'. If you want to see 'Excessive Violence' view one of Ryan Khatams submissions, or the Joe Zombie series. They are all stick animations and they are worthy of the 'Excessive Violence' tag. But there is still violence in here, even if it is a tad unrealistic(I.E: falling into a pit of spikes, wtfs up ith that?). 4/10
Humor: Fairly funny, but not any classic jokes that will keep you lauging days later. 5/10
Overall: It was an enjoyable cartoon, let down by some awful looking planes and stupid deaths.
You have some potential to be a nifty little Flasher, but with a fair bit of practice. 5/10
Peace Out.
dr00pa responds:
thanx, ill work on it, thank you for the txture tip
((( INTERESTING )))
Well notbad, the idea was great, the audio well it could use a more adult voice for some real effect, i do like the idea of sticks plus a air show, the ending was funny, could use abit more stunts but it was decent...
OVERALL : A flash full of stunts and more...
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