cool dude
is there a flash hell??
Reviews for "Flash in Heaven"
Hexleo responds:
yeah i'm kind of thinking of one at the moment. it will be much better than heaven, i will put in some kind of music, sound.
potential
Well, i gave you good grades because you have some great ideas. But you need to add some sound. Then your movie will be totally awesome
Hexleo responds:
thanks mate, i do need sound but i just cant find any in the portal. i was intending to put music in it but it will just make the file larger and load slower.
great
very atmospheric and very nice ideas there
i think the insult fight with the librarian went on a tad too long but otherwise it was good
Pretty good!
Pretty good movie! Would have been better with some sound and some music but good job anyways!
Great concept and plot... not so good execution
I really liked what you tried to do here. For one thing, the idea felt kinda like the natural extension of "Feeling Glum" (check it out, if you haven't, it's about what happens to flashes when they get submitted and go out to play around on the portal's green hills). The plot was nice, the graphics weren't great, but I don't care personally. But here's where the problems come up:
First and foremost is the lack of any sound at all. Dialogue would be nice. Sound effects would be nice. Music would be nice. Missing one of those would be okay. Missing all three? Not really acceptable. You gotta find something out there, or at least record your own stuff a BIT.
And secondly, though perhaps not as important: it starts off so promisingly with the scenes of flashes playing in heaven, and ends fairly humorously with the reincarnated flash #84099 (nice touch) dancing around with the other flashes on the portal's flash-killing banner.... but the middle section... hm... the argument with the guy was all right, but then the constant fucks and shits as he falls back to earth. They just weren't funny. I love cursing when it's funny, and it just wasn't. Way overused, too. Cut back on that section, or at least make them sounds instead of text, and I think your flash's reception will improve among the viewers. Good luck in your future endeavours.
Hexleo responds:
thanks for the review, i will do a better one next time, with sound,
this was a real helpfull review unlike some others i've read.