hee hee that was fun
that was cool dude, i liked it alot, reply to me
Reviews for "bob pain"
a bit cliche but i like it
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Not too bad
For a first effort that wasn't too bad. If you make this into a series it gives you alot of scope for diffeent situations. I like dit until the end, that could have had more effort, like i dunno, bob turning into a huge fireball or when he hit the ground it could dent or something. The way he just hit at head came off was done badly which was a shame cos up till then it was pretty well done. Try again with a little more thought and i'm sure ass kicking can be yours.