South Park, eat you rheart out...
Sounds is good. Embrace it...
Reviews for "Murry and Simms prev..."
Whoopsie. Needs salt and pepper.
This entry would've tasted better with sound.
Aside from the fact the plot was way over my head
(or was it non-existent?) it really wasn't too bad of a clip. Needs a start button and stop button. Those are essential.
It looks like the author has the characters fleshed out on his drawing board but he doesn't give a chance for them to be fleshed out in the clip.
Too many ideas in such a short film (hence the story gets really messy- didn't they die from the giant fruit? How did they come back to life?)
I'm sure a better clip is in the future.
Good start. Go Klingon monkeys!
Decent
I'll give you a 5. Decent for a Newbie..Try adding sound next time