overall 9/10
the other endings WAYYY btr i think but its a good song
overall 9/10
the other endings WAYYY btr i think but its a good song
Hmm...
This song sounds awfully familiar... At first I thought it was stolen, but then I realized that I already had the original version from you on my ipod and that's why I recognized it. In any case This is good, the ending is different but not good enough to bother replacing it with the original on my ipod
I love it.
Great stuff! Keep up the good work.
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good tune!! i love the progression.
and like the two below me said, i can totally picture some chubby kid dancing his ass off to this song on DDR lol
A little constructive criticism.
I'll be straight.
This track has the potential to be pressed on vinal spinning on a deck in a rave dude. But I do have some criticism.
I'll take you through the song.
The begining...
The synthiser that first appears (0:00) i feel should have some degree of reverberation as the majority of your samples are so. Have a listen between 0:06 and 0:10.
The square that follows (0:03) is very original, my favorite aspect among the many facets of your song! Through-out the whole song is flawless. Perfectly delayed echo, and suited every note it hit. I love it!
The sound cutoff at 0:15 had me anticipated, nice job!
The 303 synth was initiated perfectly @ 0:30 But I feel it would be more of a teaser if you let it a rest for a bit say around 0:38 It made its enterance and made its point but the tracks still begining.
(0:44) Wow a shift of the entire key, wasn't expecting that, although the modification of arpigiator was clearly well thought through and so it sounded pretty cool. I see these few bars as the 'chorus' (if thats even the right word to use) of the song, as it repeats a few times later on. (Plenty of time for the 303 to be used in later chorus'.)
(1:15) Not sure I agree with the sample you used here. I feel it comes off too strong.
(2:08) This new synth starts of sounding like a siren, Awesome! But whats with the frequency filter effects? Perhaps concider revising this sample also, or at least leave the filter alone! The fact that it slides also (2:42) is a bit too much for me to get my head around.
The ending was refreshing. I love the octave change. But that sliding siren sounds like a cats having its tail pulled all over your beautiful music!
Respect dude, your original track has left a good impression.
9/10 from me.