I liked it,
but it just sounds like a rhythm part, and doesn't really go anywhere for me. The best bits are where the strumming breaks.....
the duh-duh-da-duh-duh-da strumming gets right on my nerves anyways, so not your fault, but try and break it all up a little more, it'll give it more emotion and soul :D
Like i said, i like it, so a 4/7 from me :D