A little Hissy here and there.
When the word See comes up, it really hurts my ears. Other than that it was great.
Your sister is good at singing. She should be a main singer for your music, cus shes got some talent in this industry man. >.<
Let her know this, give her inspiration!
Now, I'd like to sing myself, but my mic doesnt like me. and the fact that if I just started singing openly, my family would be like, "HAHAH YOU RETARDED ER SUMTHIN?" Thats why im the odd one... Im the only one that likes techno in my house.
Keep up the good work!
.Korin.