Put simply...
Perfect.
Really.
Animation is fine.
Sound is well-chosen.
Story is very good, even if it lacks the little fun that there was in the first part.
Most Important Thing: Your skills improved greatly from the previous part.
There is some room for improvement, but considering this is a hobby work I think we'll not be too picky about it.
Next time please put subtitles :)
Anyway: very rotfl! All the clocks are sinchronized to my system clock! :D After I saw that effect on All Your Muffins, I wondered who was going to put the clock effect in a clock movie :)