Incredible artwork!
The artwork and animation in this movie was awesome! The 3d buildings in the background were amazing. The sound was pretty good too.
The humor was extremely dry.
The stars circling his head were really annoying and repetitive.
This was some of the best artwork I've ever seen in a flash, but you should really get someone else to write your stories, so that you can put your talent to good use.
Good, but it's missing something
I like the animation you used here. Amazing use of technique and very impressive, but you need to work on the storyline & jokes a bit more. It was very predictable - i had a feeling that piano was going to hit him, and it wasn't all that funny - the humor sort of appealed to younger people & kids. You know what i mean?
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It was ok
The art as quite good, but the voices were difficult to understand. Poor unlucky little guy. You have promise though as an artist. Keep at it! just work more at your stories!
Hmm.
It wasnt bad..
I liked how it was so dramatic for the lil guy and the way things were goin and how the old lady thought he pee'd there in the road or something.
At first i was thinking he was 'flashing' her. but yeah.
uhm. needs a bit more work to go on. But other then that, its a good job. ^^ Keep up the good work.