Should Be A Movie, Not A Game!!
Opinion: Well, I am one the people who didn't enjoy, sorry to say, the "Elmo" thing was a cheesy act and I speak for everyone that he is VERY annoying...Well done on the drawing though...
Ways To Improve: Well, you can choose a character that people would like and would laugh at without getting pissed off, and PLEASE make the voice better, again, VERY annoying.
Extra: Fix the light bulb, no one likes an unlit room.
Hope To See An Improvement,
..~xX-Yung-Chinkzta-Xx~..