Nice work!
Reviews for "The night watch"
OK (3 / 5): (Updated from 3.5 / 5 due to the review being incomplete)
Lacks a lot of substance, but otherwise decently animated.
POSITIVES:
- Good use of shading + lighting
- Good use of sound effects
NEGATIVES:
- Not very funny. Four users said they 'didnt get it', even though it's very clear what's on screen.
The Nerion soldier was picking their nose and tries to eat it while on guard and there was a Rodite hiding in the nearby ammo box. It is very clear that this soldier is completely incompetent at their job. From a story perspective, it doesn't really add much aside from showing that Stormtroopers are much more efficient than these guys.
- Only 22 seconds long. Maybe if there were some more mishaps caused by this buffoon's actions that would be considered more humorous.
INFO:
Not a lot is going on. The nosepicker doesn't move much past its initial pose and the Rodite never has any screen time aside from a few feathers. Maybe we have less of an attention span than this poor Nerion bugger, but I didn't catch it either.
~frog~
Didnt get it
Didnt get it
What's so weird is that I kept thinking his nose was his mouth. And then he picked his "mouth", and I'm like "Wait what?" lmao. Really good submission btw. Keep up the good work!