it was Ok
I liked it up until the end where he was rolling. The laughing took away the humor. There were also clicking noises during some of the talking that were obnoxious. It was decent though.
Reviews for "Donut Land"
hmm-dee-hum
i'm not sure if that was sposta be laugh out loud funny, but it didn't make me laugh. it was too predictable i think. anyway..you have great graphics and animation. i love the way his eyes looked and you draw good cartoony hands. most people have trouble with the hands. hehe..anyway, overall, it was pretty good
That sucked.......
That sound almost ruptured my eardrums.
((( FUNNY STUFF )))
Heh that was some funny stuff, it could be fixed here and there, my only advice would be lose the static from the mic, sharpen up the artwork, the story was the best though, made me laugh, nice job...
~X~
The sound went bad at the end
Graphics-5
Good hand drawn,but I know it could have looked better
Sound-5
No real point putting in the music at all, you could hardly hear it! Plus the sound at the end went all globby
Interactivity-0
Zero. Zilch. Nothing. Nada.
Style-5
Well the idea is pretty original, that's for certain. I guess with me style points go up when the overall score goes up.
Violence-1
Being turned into a pretzel DOES kinda hurt.
Humor-1
A few chuckles but not uproarious laughter.
Overall-5
Again, no major pros or cons.