Woohoo, I can really hear the progression you've been making. First, the things I like then I'll hand you a few more ideas.
That intro was super tight. The melodies were super creative. The build up at 00:40 - 00:57 was perfect. You have a real strength with melodies and build ups. The instruments were all well chosen too. You have a good ear for this. That final build up into the outro was perfect. Great ending :')
Now the stuff that got me thinking, that tiny clap snare was a tiny let down. I'd have used something with some more punch, some more mids. Maybe a hip hop snare, a dubstep snare, a rock snare, or just something with more punch and less clap. The clap snare might still make a good layer though. The bass drum left something to be desired too but you're learning stuffs so I'm happy.
I want to talk more about drum layering but I think we need to talk about compression and equalization. You're pushing your levels to their breaking point which is creating some distortion and effecting the overall texture of the track in a bad way; clipping. I have the horsepower in Reason 6 to put a compressor and EQ on every instrument. The compressor can help an instrument sound louder while keeping it's levels in check. If you can operate a compressor in your DAW, start fooling around with it. Just slapping one on an instrument won't make things sound better but it will give you some more control over your levels without pushing things into the red.
The EQ will just let you fiddle finer tunes from your instruments. God, I feel so incapable of describing these things today. Don Julio, why???
Last idea I'll leave you with is a fun one, you might enjoy this. Search youtube for samples. I plug searches into google and ride the video links to good samples. I've searched for "skrillex snares," "dubstep samples," "monologues," "George Bush." If I find a video that contains sounds I like, I go to a website like https://ytmp3.cc/ to convert youtube videos into mp3. Then I use Audacity (freeware) to clip the samples into WAV files I can use in Reason. Some of my best samples came from youtube videos. I have the experience to clean up what I find in Reason but you should have similar capabilities.
Keep jamming and have fun Mr. M3. I'm loving it.