That intro.... 2 and a half minutes... that's really long. And if you have something that long, it's bound to get repetitive. I will say that you did manage to have it *not* be super repetitive, and I'll give you brownie points there. That being said, we're talking about a 2 and a half minute intro... that's really pushing it.
If we started the song at 2:00 I would be a lot more likely to give this 5 stars.
Now, I know you wanted the lax feel, and you did execute it well. I'm not criticizing your taste. Well done.
Starting at 2:52, that begins my favorite part. Unfortunately, this is such a small portion of the song as a whole.
I wish that that part *would you call it the chorus?* was longer, I'd give it a 11/10, as it's truly amazing!
The buildup was great. it is my second favorite part of the song. Though I do feel that a few notes were off.
I wouldn't mind if you checked out my entry, and gave me a review even half as detailed as this one. ^^
To summarize:
Nice job!
Take the intro down a minute and a half, extend the chorus by 45 seconds, and this is easily one of my favourite tracks!
Reviews for "For Them (NGRMC Remix)"
Just saying this: I can hear the original melody... or... enough to know you have put it in.
Another thing, I love cinematic music, and this one is really enjoy for most of the song. :D
Also, I think the rubato piano at 4:21 is a bit too late imo.
I listened again to the rubito piano, and yeah, it's a bit late, but that's because I recorded that part to make sure it flowed freely. I kinda wanted the end of this to just float in a way, so that's why I aimed for that.
Other than that, I'm glad that you enjoyed this! Thr melody from NGRMC in this is, yeah, prominent, with very few changes (majority or which being cutting it down to the 7/8 time this is in from the 4/4 it was in), but it's just for ease to know I followed that rule :p
dope, though the build up is bit boring for my tastes
I mean tbh the buildup is not the greatest by far, but for a song like this I'm honestly satisfied with it. I think it may need a little motion in it for the drop, but otherwise, really glad that you enjoyed this :D