Vocals
Personally, I'm into hip hop for the mind, so I have to give you props on the principle that you put up a positive message.
As far as the loop/beat, I wasn't feeling it... felt like I should have been at wedding or something but that's OK - someone else might think it's great.
The vocals need to be recorded better. It sounded like you were wettin' the mic(too close)and you might want to put just a tiny-tiny amount of reverb or something.
aight man thanks for the advice, da beat was hard to make cuz i asked sorta too specificaly, but I improvised by making it feel like I'm teaching a class, da mic ye I prolly did put it a little too close next time I'll keep it far away, anyway man thanks for da constructive review, 5, i think dl and thanks for not hating,
Save the bees,
Keep it pimpin'
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yo yo yo
save tha world no save my ears what da fuck iz dis sik not bad u need a new mic and it ill sound better
agreed sir, new mic coming in by end of next week so no worries,
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Dude no flow and sorry but shitty lyrics.
Keep the bees alive?
lmfao, check the new shit man like happy days=D
This is horrible.
The lyrics are wack. The delivery is weak, and this kid has completely NO FLOW.
Next time write a poem and maybe I'll take you more seriously.
-RMP
glad you commented on my newest track which was made only about a year ago,
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W00t!!
You own! Make more awwareness raps, these are both funny (in a good way) and they raise awareness.
Thanks man, and if I find something the world needs to know don't worry I will be first to get on the subject, however I'm a little disapointed that you haven't noticed the little stars that give you a review score cuz I got a 0 from you ='( I'm sure it wasn't intentional. Anyway man thanks for the support, I always apreciate it and I believe you've 5'd metoo and probobly gave me a download so thanks and
Keep it pimpin'
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