Very nice.
I loved the diverse rythms in this song. the sorta rock ballad-like drum beat in the middle was the sicket part of the song.
lets see... piano: realistic, but a bit over doing the song.
Bass: little bit too quiet in the treble. turn that up and ya.
the song itself sounded like maestrorage fucked paragonx9 (assuming he/she is a woman) and popped u out.
...try sleeping on that.