Amazing
I can totally see the story you made when I listen to this song Lemartes, amazing work on the story, and of course amazing work on the song Maestro, Loving every song 10/10
Reviews for "_-={Wrath of a Broken Soul}=-_"
WOWWWWW
wow lemartes, short but moving
a great description to this song, someone should make a flash (with both maestro and lemartes permission of course)
it would definitely be moving and epic
once again maestro, capturing the perfect moment of battle!!!
great job 1000/10
wow!
Hey maestro I'm back after a couple of weeks has it been? i lost track anyways if you didn't get the story i sent you sorry...my computer erased it. But i can write you one right now!
Onitsukay fell to his knees, he couldn't believe he'd been tricked. His village was now being destroyed by hellspawn demons, and it was all because he misinterpreted what the demon's pact was.
He stood and rushed down the hill seeing if there was anyone he could save after his terrible mistake. He pulled a few shurikens away from his belt and was getting close to the village gates.
He immediately knew what was and why the place was being destroyed so easily. What had happened to the militia? He discarded the thought and ran down one of the dirt roads kicking up dust and crunching the gravel beneath his feet. He turned a left saw a giant stomping on a house, and a few people screaming and trying to get away.
He jumped up on a roof, threw five shurikens in the beasts back, and jumped on its back. It knew he was there and was trying to crush him with mighty and huge hands. Each time he struck his own back shockwaves knocked Onitsukay off balance.
Onitsukay drew his sword and began stabbing the monster's head. As the monster fell and the people escaped another appeared and said, "Well, it seems that even my most trusted genaral stood not even the slightest chance against you. So try me!"
This creature was about the same size as Onitsukay, but was alot faster. Onitsukay tried throwing shurikens at him, but they either thinked into the ground or a wall of a nearby building.
Then the monster made the mistake of going in for the kill by trying to stab him straight on. Onitsukay grabbed the hand of this weird creature, holding the monster in place, but keeping the blade in his stomach.
He remarked, "Bet you weren't expecting that!" and decapitated the thing before him, let the hand go and the boody fall.
"At least I may have made up for what I did." And with that he went to go fight more demons while bleeding to death from the wound in his stomach.
As usual another Maestrorific piece from you! Keep up the great work.
Sweet
Another great piece by you, MaestroRage. In your mission to help give people ideas and stories, you succeed with flourish. Listening to songs as powerful and moving as these brings a vision or idea to me every time I hear them. Great work, and keep it coming. :)
Well, here goes!
Two armies clash on a broken field. The air is full of gunsmoke and the screams of dying men. The two generals, once united in their quest for world peace, are now turned against each other in a desperate bid for power. So caught up in the rage of battle are they that neither man sees his fate coming. From the north, a third army marches. Ancient steel gleams muderously in the morning light. Neither man shall take victory. The Emperor, thought lost, has returned.
MaestroRage responds:
Indeed a powerful and image invoking story Lemartes D:!!!
I absolutely adored the sentiments. When the choirs jump in I can see the Emperor's army gleaming in the light!
Well written, well written indeed! Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!