Is it okay if i'll "love you." instead? Melodies or "love me" parts are pretty cool, although those more random and dissonant "fear me" parts don't feel right, or scary, more like "oops i've played a bunch of wrong notes very quickly" also in the beginning there was too much of that one note tension. 1:57+ feels like a completely different song though, isn't really related to the other half, i get that you were going for the contrast but for me it just didn't feel right, maybe separating the halves into 2 songs would be more appropriate, in my opinion at least.
Reviews for "Restricted"
loklokfafa responds:
Thanks for your review! To be honest, the point of this experimental was to push the boundaries of music, to see how far I could take it before it sounded like someone was literally just smashing on the keys. I was also experimenting with how much contrast I wanted in this, in which judging by your review, you found it a little too much. Another idea that was important to me was seeing how many similarities I could bring up between the, as you call it, "love me" and "fear me" parts. Kind of disappointed you didn't pick up on that, but fine by me. Overall, this song was a huge struggle to balance out both parts, and I'm glad you found some part of this piece cool.