Needs finishing touches
Plot, decent animation, and some originality gives this movie potential.
Town: Zoom in to where the action is. About 40 per cent of the town image is useless.
Text: Black text on dark blue background is difficultt to read.
Replay screen: Makes my eyes hurt with too many gradients and other weird stuff.
zoom in to the action....damn...your right! thanks a lot man even if you did give it a low score as for the black text i will just use all white next time
sucks
I still couldn't get the plot. They just started fighting and then ended up on some beach. what the fuck.
well the plot is pretty basic...it briefs you on what its about in the first,but after I get some plot making skills I will build on the plot and make it decent
Needs fixing
Had to right click play on every frame. Try fixing and resubmitting
ugh there was a big black arrow at the bottem right of the text box...